General Training Writing Task 1 · formal · application

Application letter for a part-time position: IELTS formal letter sample

An IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 formal letter with a Band 8 sample answer, why it scores well and the phrases worth borrowing for your own letter writing.
  • 185 words
  • Formal letters
  • Application
  • 20 minutes

The task

You learned the news from your friend regarding a part-time job at a new international company near your house.

Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:

  • →explain why you need that job
  • →give details of what you can do for the company
  • →suggest the time that you can work

Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,

Model answer

Band 8 sample letter

Band 8185 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.

Dear Mr. Henderson,

I am writing to formally express my interest in the part-time vacancy at your new branch, which was recently brought to my attention by a friend. As I live in the immediate vicinity of your office, I am eager to contribute to your operations while balancing my current academic commitments.

Currently, I am seeking a position that allows me to gain professional experience while financing my studies. Your company’s reputation for excellence in the international market is highly appealing, and I am keen to develop my skills within such a dynamic environment.

Regarding my qualifications, I possess strong administrative and interpersonal skills. During my previous volunteer work at a community centre, I became adept at managing client inquiries and maintaining organised digital records. I am confident that my proficiency in both English and French would be a valuable asset for your front-desk operations.

I am available to work every weekday afternoon from 2:00 PM onwards, as well as all day on Saturdays. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application further during an interview at your convenience.

Yours sincerely,

James Sterling

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Examiner's view

Why this scores well

This response earns a Band 8 by addressing all three bullet points with specific, relevant details while maintaining a consistently professional and polite tone. A common mistake for Band 6 candidates is failing to provide clear, actionable availability or using overly casual language unsuitable for a formal job application.

  • →Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
  • →If you know the person's surname, use Dear Mr or Ms and close with Yours sincerely.
  • →No contractions, no slang; polite indirect requests such as I would be grateful if you could.

6 phrases

Useful phrases from the letter

  • immediate vicinity

    in the local area very close by

  • academic commitments

    the responsibilities related to being a student

  • dynamic

    characterised by constant change, activity, or progress

  • adept

    very skilled or proficient at something

  • valuable asset

    a person or thing that is highly useful

  • at your convenience

    at a time that is suitable for you

Frequently asked questions

Is this letter formal or informal?+

Formal. Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.

How many words should an IELTS General Training letter be?+

At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

What does the examiner look for?+

This response earns a Band 8 by addressing all three bullet points with specific, relevant details while maintaining a consistently professional and polite tone. A common mistake for Band 6 candidates is failing to provide clear, actionable availability or using overly casual language unsuitable for a formal job application.

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