Dear Principal Thompson,
I am writing to formally enquire about the status of my application for the Master of Data Science programme, which I submitted via your online portal on 15th January. To date, I have not received any correspondence regarding the outcome of my submission.
My primary interest lies in your institution’s renowned programme in Data Science. I have long admired the college’s commitment to cutting-edge research, particularly the focus on artificial intelligence applications in healthcare. Having reviewed the curriculum, I am confident that the practical laboratory sessions will provide the essential skills required for my career progression.
I chose your college specifically because of its strong industry partnerships in Melbourne. These links offer invaluable internship opportunities that are simply not available elsewhere. I believe this environment is the ideal setting to refine my technical expertise.
It is imperative that I receive a decision shortly, as I must finalise my visa arrangements and secure student accommodation before the semester commences in July. Any delay in this process could jeopardise my ability to enrol on time. I would be most grateful if you could look into this matter at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Jonathan Miller