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Formal request to Human Resources for remote work: IELTS formal letter sample

An IELTS General Training Writing Task 1 formal letter with a Band 8 sample answer, why it scores well and the phrases worth borrowing for your own letter writing.
  • 201 words
  • Formal letters
  • Request
  • 20 minutes

The task

Your employer has recently allowed some employees to work remotely from home. You would also like to work from home.

Write a letter to the HR manager for permission to work from home for the next six months. In your letter:

  • →mention why you are writing
  • →explain why you would like to work from home
  • →say how this can benefit you and the company

Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter: Dear ...,

Model answer

Band 8 sample letter

Band 8201 words. Names and details are invented; write your own.

Dear Ms. Sterling,

I am writing to formally request permission to transition to a remote work arrangement for the next six months, beginning on the first of next month. Having observed the recent policy shift allowing colleagues in the development department to work from home, I am eager to explore whether such an arrangement could be extended to my role in the marketing team.

Currently, my daily commute consumes two hours of travel time, which significantly impacts my productivity and energy levels. By working from home, I would be able to reclaim this time, allowing me to start my tasks earlier and maintain a better work-life balance.

I am confident that this shift would be mutually beneficial. From my perspective, the quiet home environment will allow me to focus on complex analytical projects without the frequent interruptions present in the open-plan office. For the company, this arrangement ensures that I remain fully accessible via digital platforms while reducing the overhead costs associated with my desk space. I am fully committed to maintaining my current performance standards and am happy to attend in-person meetings whenever necessary.

Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your response.

Yours sincerely,

Julian Thorne

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Examiner's view

Why this scores well

This letter achieves Band 8 by clearly addressing all prompts with a professional, persuasive tone and sophisticated vocabulary. A common mistake for Band 6 candidates is failing to explain how the company benefits, often focusing entirely on personal convenience rather than business outcomes.

  • →Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.
  • →If you know the person's surname, use Dear Mr or Ms and close with Yours sincerely.
  • →No contractions, no slang; polite indirect requests such as I would be grateful if you could.

6 phrases

Useful phrases from the letter

  • transition

    to change from one state or condition to another

  • reclaim

    to get back something that was previously lost

  • mutually beneficial

    something that provides advantages to both involved parties

  • overhead costs

    regular expenses required to operate a business

  • accessible

    easy to reach or communicate with at any time

  • analytical projects

    tasks requiring detailed examination and logical thinking processes

Frequently asked questions

Is this letter formal or informal?+

Formal. Write to an organisation or someone you do not know: open with Dear Sir or Madam, close with Yours faithfully.

How many words should an IELTS General Training letter be?+

At least 150 words, and 160 to 200 is the comfortable range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

What does the examiner look for?+

This letter achieves Band 8 by clearly addressing all prompts with a professional, persuasive tone and sophisticated vocabulary. A common mistake for Band 6 candidates is failing to explain how the company benefits, often focusing entirely on personal convenience rather than business outcomes.

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