Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Annual visitor numbers for three London museums between 2007 and 2012: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 204 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The number of Museum Visitors from 2007 to 2012 (millions)
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  • National Gallery
  • Victoria and Albert Museum
  • British Museum
View the data
200720082009201020112012
National Gallery6.27.88.5111115.8
Victoria and Albert Museum13.513.58.86.5810
British Museum12667.21214

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8204 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the annual visitor numbers for the National Gallery, the Victoria and Albert Museum, and the British Museum between 2007 and 2012. Units are measured in millions.

Overall, the National Gallery experienced a significant upward trend in attendance, while the Victoria and Albert Museum saw its visitor numbers fluctuate considerably over the six-year period. The British Museum also showed volatility but finished the period as the second most visited institution.

In 2007, the Victoria and Albert Museum was the most popular, with 13.5 million visitors, followed by the British Museum at 12.0 million and the National Gallery at 6.2 million. By 2008, the National Gallery’s figures rose to 7.8 million, whereas the British Museum’s attendance halved to 6.0 million. The Victoria and Albert Museum maintained its 13.5 million figure in 2008 before dropping sharply to 8.8 million in 2009.

By 2012, the National Gallery had become the most visited, reaching a peak of 15.8 million. The British Museum also recovered significantly, rising from a low of 6.0 million in 2009 to 14.0 million by 2012. Conversely, the Victoria and Albert Museum saw a more modest recovery, ending the period at 10.0 million visitors, which was lower than its initial 2007 levels.

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Bar charts

How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • fluctuate

    to change frequently between rising and falling levels

  • upward trend

    a general direction of growth or increase

  • sharply

    a sudden and significant change in a value

  • peak

    the highest point reached during a specific period

  • modest

    a relatively small or limited amount of change

  • conversely

    introducing a statement that contrasts with previous information

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, the National Gallery experienced a significant upward trend in attendance, while the Victoria and Albert Museum saw its visitor numbers fluctuate considerably over the six-year period.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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