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Average household expenditure in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 pie chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about pie charts.
  • 180 words
  • Pie charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Japan (%)
  • Housing: 21%
  • Transport: 20%
  • Food: 24%
  • Health care: 6%
  • Other goods and services: 29%
View the data
CategoryValue (%)
Housing21
Transport20
Food24
Health care6
Other goods and services29
Malaysia (%)
  • Housing: 34%
  • Transport: 10%
  • Food: 27%
  • Health care: 3%
  • Other goods and services: 26%
View the data
CategoryValue (%)
Housing34
Transport10
Food27
Health care3
Other goods and services26

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8180 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The two pie charts illustrate the distribution of average household spending across five categories in Japan and Malaysia during 2010. Overall, it is evident that housing and other goods and services were the primary expenses in both nations, although the specific proportions varied significantly between the two countries.

In Japan, other goods and services represented the largest share of expenditure at 29%, followed closely by food at 24%. Housing and transport accounted for 21% and 20% respectively, while health care comprised the smallest portion at only 6%.

Conversely, Malaysian households allocated the highest percentage of their budget to housing, which stood at 34%. Food was the second most significant expense at 27%, followed by other goods and services at 26%. Transport costs in Malaysia were notably lower than in Japan, accounting for 10% of total spending. Health care represented the least significant category in Malaysia as well, at a mere 3%, which is half the proportion observed in Japan. In summary, while both countries prioritised similar categories, the relative weight of these expenses differed, particularly regarding housing and transport costs.

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Pie charts

How to write about pie charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview.
  • →Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority.
  • →With two pies, compare the same slice across both.
  • distribution

    the way in which something is shared out

  • proportion

    a part or share of a whole amount

  • accounted for

    to make up a specific amount or share

  • allocated

    to distribute resources for a particular purpose

  • notably

    in a way that is worthy of attention

  • comprised

    to consist of or be made up of

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While housing was the largest expenditure in Malaysia, other goods and services accounted for the highest proportion of spending in Japan.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe pie charts?+

Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview. Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority. With two pies, compare the same slice across both.

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