Academic Writing Task 1 · table

Average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 table question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about tables.
  • 192 words
  • Tables
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003
CitiesMen YearsMen MonthsWomen YearsWomen Months
Australia641635
United States656642
Japan674669
Italy582573
France574569
Korea688672

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8192 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The table illustrates the average retirement age for men and women across six different countries in 2003. Overall, it is evident that men retired later than women in every nation listed. Furthermore, Korea and France represent the upper and lower extremes of retirement age, respectively.

In Korea, men retired at 68 years and 8 months, while women retired at 67 years and 2 months, marking the highest figures in the dataset. Japan followed closely, with men retiring at 67 years and 4 months and women at 66 years and 9 months. The United States also showed relatively high retirement ages, with men at 65 years and 6 months and women at 64 years and 2 months.

Conversely, European nations reported lower retirement ages. In Australia, men retired at 64 years and 1 month, compared to 63 years and 5 months for women. Italy and France recorded the lowest figures. In Italy, men retired at 58 years and 2 months, while women retired at 57 years and 3 months. France had the lowest retirement ages overall, with men retiring at 57 years and 4 months and women at 56 years and 9 months.

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How to write about tables: tips and vocabulary

  • →Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself.
  • →Select; do not list every cell.
  • →Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.
  • consistently

    occurring in the same way over time

  • extremes

    the highest and lowest points of data

  • followed closely

    coming after something with a small difference

  • conversely

    introducing a statement that contrasts with previous

  • recorded

    set down in writing or other permanent form

  • overall

    taking everything into account as a whole

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Across all six countries, men consistently retired at a later age than women, with Korea recording the highest retirement ages for both genders and France recording the lowest.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe tables?+

Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself. Select; do not list every cell. Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.

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