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Bathing Suit Sales and Average Monthly Temperatures in New York 2012: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 189 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Bathing Suit Sales (US$) and Temperature Figures for New York City - 2012 (Hundred Thousands US$ and Fahrenheit)
0100200300400500JanuaryFebruaryMarchAprilMayJune
  • Revenue: Hundred Thousands US$
  • Average Temperatures (Fahrenheit)
View the data
JanuaryFebruaryMarchAprilMayJune
Revenue: Hundred Thousands US$1001251502908520
Average Temperatures (Fahrenheit)313038495965

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8189 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar and line chart illustrates the relationship between average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York City during the first half of 2012. Overall, it is evident that temperature and revenue do not follow a perfectly linear correlation, as sales peaked mid-spring despite temperatures continuing to rise into June.

In January, temperatures stood at 31°F, with sales reaching 100 hundred thousand US$. Over the next two months, temperatures rose gradually to 38°F in March, while revenue saw a steady increase to 150 hundred thousand US$. April marked a dramatic shift, as sales surged to a peak of 290 hundred thousand US$, even though the average temperature was only 49°F.

Following this peak, the trend for sales reversed sharply. By May, revenue plummeted to 85 hundred thousand US$, and it fell further to a low of 20 hundred thousand US$ in June. Conversely, the average temperature continued its steady climb, reaching 59°F in May and peaking at 65°F in June. Consequently, the highest sales figures occurred well before the warmest month of the period, indicating that peak temperature does not necessarily equate to peak bathing suit demand.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • fluctuated

    changed frequently and irregularly in a set

  • upward trend

    a general direction of increasing values

  • peaked

    reached the highest point in a series

  • plummeted

    decreased rapidly and by a large amount

  • correlation

    a mutual relationship between two or more things

  • equate to

    to be considered the same as something else

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While temperatures showed a consistent upward trend throughout the six-month period, bathing suit sales fluctuated significantly, peaking in April before declining sharply.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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