Academic Writing Task 1 · table

Employment rates and average annual salaries of Australian university graduates in 2009: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 table question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about tables.
  • 186 words
  • Tables
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Employment rates and average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009
Areas of studyEmployment rateAverage annual salaries
Health93%$42,000
Law87%$59,000
Engineering and IT86%$59,000
Business78%$52,000
Arts and Social Science72%$50,000
Science62%$39,000

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8186 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The table illustrates the employment rates and average annual salaries for graduates across six different fields of study at an Australian university in 2009. Overall, it is evident that there is no direct correlation between high employment rates and higher salaries, as the field with the highest employment rate offered one of the lowest starting salaries.

Health graduates recorded the highest employment rate at 93%, although their average annual salary was relatively modest at $42,000. In contrast, Law and Engineering and IT graduates shared the highest average annual salaries at $59,000 each, with corresponding employment rates of 87% and 86% respectively. Business graduates followed with an employment rate of 78% and an average salary of $52,000.

At the lower end of the spectrum, Arts and Social Science graduates had an employment rate of 72% and earned an average of $50,000 annually. Science graduates experienced the lowest employment rate at 62% and also received the lowest average annual salary of $39,000. While Health graduates were the most likely to be employed, those in the Law and Engineering sectors were the most financially rewarded upon entering the workforce.

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How to write about tables: tips and vocabulary

  • →Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself.
  • →Select; do not list every cell.
  • →Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.
  • correlation

    a mutual relationship or connection between two things

  • modest

    relatively moderate or limited in amount or size

  • corresponding

    having a close similarity or connection to something

  • spectrum

    a range of different positions or values

  • financially rewarded

    receiving a good amount of money for work

  • entering the workforce

    starting to work in a professional career field

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Health graduates enjoyed the highest employment rate, while Law and Engineering and IT graduates commanded the highest average annual salaries.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe tables?+

Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself. Select; do not list every cell. Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.

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