Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Employment rates for males and females across six countries 1995-2005: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 197 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The chart below shows the employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Employment Rates, by Country, 1995 - 2005 (%)
020406080100AustraliaSwitzerlandIcelandUKNew ZealandUSA
  • 1995 Male
  • 2005 Male
  • 1995 Female
  • 2005 Female
View the data
AustraliaSwitzerlandIcelandUKNew ZealandUSA
1995 Male576671556059
2005 Male697883737271
1995 Female275641512545
2005 Female396853634261

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8197 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates changes in employment rates for males and females across six nations between 1995 and 2005. Overall, it is evident that employment figures rose for both genders in every country surveyed, with men consistently recording higher participation rates than women throughout the period.

In 1995, male employment was highest in Iceland at 71%, followed by Switzerland at 66%. By 2005, Iceland remained the leader for male employment, reaching a peak of 83%, while Switzerland also saw a significant rise to 78%. Australia and the UK experienced notable growth in male employment, increasing from 57% and 55% respectively in 1995 to 69% and 73% a decade later. New Zealand and the USA showed similar trends, with male employment rates climbing to 72% and 71% by 2005.

Regarding female employment, Switzerland recorded the highest rate in 1995 at 56%, whereas New Zealand had the lowest at 25%. By 2005, Switzerland continued to lead with 68%, followed by the UK at 63% and the USA at 61%. Australia and New Zealand saw the most dramatic relative growth for women, with rates rising from 27% to 39% and 25% to 42% respectively, although they remained the lowest overall.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • participation rates

    the percentage of a population that is employed

  • consistently

    happening in the same way over a period

  • notable growth

    a significant or important increase in value

  • dramatic

    a sudden, striking, or very noticeable change

  • surveyed

    examined or looked at as part of data

  • relative

    considered in relation to something else

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, employment rates increased for both genders in all six countries over the decade, with males consistently maintaining higher employment levels than females.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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