Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Employment rates for males and females across six countries in 1995 and 2005: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 185 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005 (%)
020406080100AustraliaSwitzerlandIcelandUKNew ZealandUSA
  • Male, 1995
  • Male, 2005
  • Female, 1995
  • Female, 2005
View the data
AustraliaSwitzerlandIcelandUKNew ZealandUSA
Male, 1995566571556059
Male, 2005697883727171
Female, 1995275641512545
Female, 2005396852624161

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8185 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates changes in employment rates for males and females across six nations between 1995 and 2005. Overall, it is evident that employment figures rose in every country for both genders, although males consistently recorded higher rates than their female counterparts throughout the decade.

In 1995, male employment was highest in Iceland at 71%, followed by Switzerland at 65%. By 2005, Iceland remained the leader for male employment, reaching a peak of 83%, while Switzerland followed at 78%. The UK, New Zealand, and the USA all saw male employment rise to 72%, 71%, and 71% respectively by 2005. Australia experienced the most significant growth for males, climbing from 56% in 1995 to 69% a decade later.

Regarding female employment, Switzerland recorded the highest rates in both years, increasing from 56% to 68%. Conversely, New Zealand and Australia started with the lowest female employment rates in 1995 at 25% and 27% respectively. By 2005, these figures had improved to 41% and 39%. The UK and USA also showed notable growth, with female employment reaching 62% and 61% respectively by the end of the period.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • consistently

    happening in the same way over a period

  • counterparts

    people or things that have the same function

  • peak

    the highest point or level of something

  • notable

    worthy of attention or striking in nature

  • conversely

    in a way that is the opposite

  • illustrates

    provides a visual representation of the data

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, employment rates increased for both genders in all six countries over the ten-year period, with males consistently maintaining higher employment levels than females.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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