Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Employment rates for men and women in three countries across 2005 and 2015: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 171 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The bar charts below show the percentages of men and women in employment in three countries in 2005 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Employment rates by country in 2005 (%)
020406080100CanadaSouth KoreaSweden
  • Male
  • Female
View the data
CanadaSouth KoreaSweden
Male627578
Female383045
Employment rates by country in 2015 (%)
020406080100CanadaSouth KoreaSweden
  • Male
  • Female
View the data
CanadaSouth KoreaSweden
Male707870
Female553550

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8171 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar charts compare the employment percentages of men and women in Canada, South Korea, and Sweden during 2005 and 2015. Overall, it is evident that female employment rates rose across all three nations over the ten-year period. Furthermore, men consistently recorded higher employment figures than their female counterparts in both years.

In 2005, male employment was highest in Sweden at 78%, followed by South Korea at 75% and Canada at 62%. Conversely, female employment was significantly lower, peaking at 45% in Sweden, while Canada and South Korea stood at 38% and 30% respectively.

By 2015, the landscape had shifted. Female employment rates saw notable growth, reaching 55% in Canada, 50% in Sweden, and 35% in South Korea. Regarding male employment, the rate in Canada increased to 70% and in South Korea to 78%. However, Sweden experienced a decline in male employment, falling to 70%. Despite these changes, the gender gap remained prevalent in all three countries, although it narrowed slightly in Canada and Sweden by the end of the period.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • counterparts

    people or things that have the same function

  • prevalent

    existing very commonly or happening often

  • notable

    worthy of attention or striking

  • shifted

    moved or changed from one position to another

  • narrowed

    became smaller in width or range

  • varied

    incorporating a number of different types or elements

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, employment rates for women increased in all three countries over the decade, while male employment trends were more varied, with men consistently maintaining higher employment rates than women.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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