Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Estimated world illiteracy rates by region and gender in 2000: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 188 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Estimated world illiteracy rates, by region and by gender, 2000 (%)
020406080100Developed CountriesLatin America/CaribbeanEast Asia/Oceania*Sub-Saharan AfricaArab StatesSouth Asia
  • Male
  • Female
View the data
Developed CountriesLatin America/CaribbeanEast Asia/Oceania*Sub-Saharan AfricaArab StatesSouth Asia
Male1108312934
Female21220485356

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8188 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the estimated illiteracy rates across six distinct global regions, categorised by gender, for the year 2000. Overall, it is evident that illiteracy was more prevalent among women than men in every region, with the most substantial gaps observed in the regions with the highest overall rates.

Developed countries reported the lowest illiteracy levels, with rates of 1% for males and 2% for females. Latin America/Caribbean and East Asia/Oceania* followed, showing relatively low figures. In Latin America/Caribbean, the rates were 10% for males and 12% for females. Interestingly, East Asia/Oceania* displayed a wider gap, with 8% of males and 20% of females being illiterate.

In contrast, Sub-Saharan Africa, the Arab States, and South Asia recorded significantly higher illiteracy rates. South Asia had the highest female illiteracy at 56%, compared to 34% for males. Similarly, the Arab States showed a pronounced disparity, with 53% of females and 29% of males unable to read. Sub-Saharan Africa also faced high levels, with 48% of females and 31% of males classified as illiterate. In all cases, the female population consistently faced greater challenges regarding literacy than their male counterparts.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • prevalent

    widespread or common in a particular area

  • disparity

    a great difference between two or more things

  • categorised

    placed into a particular group or class

  • substantial

    of considerable importance, size, or worth

  • counterparts

    people or things that correspond to another

  • recorded

    set down in writing or another permanent form

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Illiteracy rates were consistently higher for females than males across all regions, with South Asia and the Arab States experiencing the most significant gender disparities.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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