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Internet usage patterns by gender in Canada among 15-24 year olds: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 183 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows how men and women used the Internet in Canada in 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

% of male and female internet users (15-24 age group) (%)
020406080100e-mailGoods and servicesChat roomsGamesOnline shoppingResearch and education
  • Females
  • Males
View the data
e-mailGoods and servicesChat roomsGamesOnline shoppingResearch and education
Females71614858389
Males707150642813

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8183 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of male and female internet users aged 15-24 in Canada in 2000 across six different online activities. Overall, it is clear that while e-mail was the most frequently used service for both genders, there were notable disparities in preferences for other activities, particularly regarding shopping and gaming.

E-mail usage was remarkably similar between the two groups, with 71% of females and 70% of males using it. In contrast, males were more active in purchasing goods and services at 71%, compared to 61% for females. Similarly, males participated more in gaming (64%) and research and education (13%) than their female counterparts, who recorded figures of 58% and 9% respectively. Chat rooms showed a slight male lead, with 50% of males using them compared to 48% of females.

Conversely, females were significantly more inclined towards online shopping, with 38% of female users engaging in this activity, which was 10 percentage points higher than the 28% recorded for males. Overall, the data highlights that while digital communication was universally popular, gender-based differences were evident in entertainment and commercial internet activities.

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Bar charts

How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • disparities

    a great difference or inequality between two things

  • counterparts

    people or things that correspond to another

  • inclined

    feeling willing or favorably disposed toward an action

  • percentage points

    the arithmetic difference between two percentage values

  • universally

    in a way that applies to all cases

  • notable

    worthy of attention or striking in appearance

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, e-mail was the most popular activity for both genders, while males generally engaged more in gaming and research, whereas females showed a stronger preference for online shopping.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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