Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Leisure time per week for men and women by employment status: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 187 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment statuses. Leisure time in a typical week in hours- by sex and employment status, 1998-99.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Leisure time in a typical week in hours by sex and employment status, 1998-99 (hours)
020406080100Employed (Full Time)Employed (Part Time)UnemployedRetiredHousewives
  • Male
  • Female
View the data
Employed (Full Time)Employed (Part Time)UnemployedRetiredHousewives
Male44085840
Female3740787850

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8187 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the weekly leisure hours for men and women across five different employment categories during the 1998-99 period. Overall, it is evident that unemployment and retirement provided the highest amount of leisure time, whereas full-time employment resulted in the lowest figures. Notably, men generally experienced more leisure time than women, except in the part-time employment and housewife categories.

Regarding employment, men working full-time enjoyed 44 hours of leisure per week, which was higher than the 37 hours reported by their female counterparts. Interestingly, while no data was provided for men in part-time employment, women in this category had 40 hours of leisure time. The unemployed group reported the highest leisure figures overall, with men at 85 hours and women at 78 hours.

Similarly, retired individuals also had significant leisure time, with men recording 84 hours and women 78 hours. Finally, the category of housewives, which only included women, showed a leisure time of 50 hours per week. In summary, the data highlights a clear disparity in leisure time based on both gender and employment status, with non-working individuals benefiting from substantially more free time.

Write your own report and get a band

Take a timed Academic writing test and get a band for task achievement, coherence, vocabulary and grammar, with the sentences to fix.

Write a report, get a band free →

Bar charts

How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • disparity

    a great difference between two or more things

  • counterparts

    people or things that have the same function

  • illustrates

    provides pictures or data to explain something clearly

  • notably

    used to draw attention to a specific fact

  • recorded

    set down in writing or another permanent form

  • substantially

    to a great or significant extent or degree

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, unemployed and retired individuals enjoyed the most leisure time, while those in full-time employment had the least, with men consistently reporting higher leisure hours than women in most categories.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

Keep practising

More bar charts

© 2026 BandLadder. Written and checked by the BandLadder team. You may quote or cite this page with credit to BandLadder and a link to it; republishing it in full needs our written permission. Content use policy

Write a report, get a band free