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Number of Own Operated and Franchised Restaurants in Someland 2007-2012: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 182 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The bar graph below shows the number of own operated and Franchised restaurants from 2007 to 2012 in Someland.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Number of Restaurants in Someland
02004006008001,00020072008200920102011THROUGH 3Q 2012
  • Own Operated Restaurants
  • Franchised Restaurants
View the data
20072008200920102011THROUGH 3Q 2012
Own Operated Restaurants586259776771
Franchised Restaurants522580681712813913

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8182 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the growth in the number of own-operated and franchised restaurants in Someland between 2007 and the third quarter of 2012. Overall, it is evident that the total number of restaurants increased steadily over the six-year period, driven primarily by a substantial rise in franchised locations.

In 2007, there were 522 franchised restaurants, a figure that climbed consistently each year to reach 913 by the third quarter of 2012. This growth was particularly pronounced between 2008 and 2009, when the number of franchised outlets rose from 580 to 681. By contrast, the number of own-operated restaurants remained relatively low and stable. Starting at 58 in 2007, this figure fluctuated slightly, peaking at 77 in 2010 before dipping to 67 in 2011 and recovering to 71 by the third quarter of 2012.

Throughout the entire period, franchised restaurants consistently accounted for the vast majority of the total market. While the number of own-operated restaurants saw only marginal changes, the franchised sector expanded by nearly 75% from its 2007 levels, demonstrating a clear preference for the franchise business model in Someland.

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Bar charts

How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • upward trend

    a general direction in which something is developing

  • outnumbering

    being more numerous than another group or category

  • pronounced

    very noticeable, obvious, or strongly marked in character

  • fluctuated

    rising and falling irregularly in number or amount

  • marginal

    minor, small, or insignificant in terms of change

  • vast majority

    a very large proportion of the total amount

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

The total number of restaurants in Someland experienced a consistent upward trend throughout the period, with franchised outlets significantly outnumbering own-operated establishments.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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