Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Percentage of Australian residents by birthplace and living area 1995-2010: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 183 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The bar chart below describes some changes in the percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural, and towns between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

1995 (%)
020406080100People born in AustraliaPeople born outside Aus…
  • Cities
  • Towns
  • Rural areas
View the data
People born in AustraliaPeople born outside Australia
Cities5060
Towns2012
Rural areas3040
2010 (%)
020406080100People born in AustraliaPeople born outside Aus…
  • Cities
  • Towns
  • Rural areas
View the data
People born in AustraliaPeople born outside Australia
Cities6580
Towns158
Rural areas154

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8183 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar charts illustrate changes in the residential distribution of people born in Australia and those born abroad across cities, towns, and rural areas between 1995 and 2010.

Overall, there was a significant shift towards city living for both groups, while the proportion of people residing in towns and rural areas declined between 1995 and 2010. Notably, city dwellers became the dominant demographic for both groups by the end of the period.

In 1995, 50% of Australian-born residents lived in cities, compared to 60% of those born outside the country. By 2010, these figures rose to 65% and 80%, respectively. Conversely, the percentage of Australian-born people living in towns fell from 20% to 15%, and those in rural areas also dropped from 30% to 15%.

For people born outside Australia, the decline in non-city living was even more pronounced. The proportion living in towns decreased from 12% in 1995 to 8% in 2010, while the rural population plummeted from 40% to just 4%. Consequently, by 2010, the vast majority of overseas-born residents were concentrated in cities, with very few remaining in rural locations.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • proportion

    a part, share, or number considered in comparative relation

  • residential distribution

    the way people are spread out across locations

  • plummeted

    to fall or drop straight down at high speed

  • concentrated

    gathered together in a large number or amount

  • demographic

    a particular sector of a population

  • pronounced

    very noticeable, obvious, or strongly marked

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, there was a significant shift towards city living for both groups, while the proportion of people residing in towns and rural areas declined between 1995 and 2010.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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