Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Percentage of male and female teachers in six UK educational settings in 2010: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 178 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of male and female teachers in six educational settings in the UK in 2010 (%)
020406080100Nursery/Pre-schoolPrimary schoolSecondary schoolCollegePrivate training instit…University
  • Men
  • Women
View the data
Nursery/Pre-schoolPrimary schoolSecondary schoolCollegePrivate training instituteUniversity
Men4847505370
Women969253504730

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8178 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the gender distribution of teachers across six different educational institutions in the UK during 2010. Overall, it is clear that there is a significant gender imbalance in early years and higher education, while secondary schools and colleges show a more balanced representation.

In nursery and pre-school settings, women account for a massive 96% of the workforce, leaving men at a mere 4%. A similar trend is observed in primary schools, where 92% of teachers are female compared to only 8% who are male. This pattern shifts as the level of education increases. In secondary schools, the gender gap narrows significantly, with women making up 53% and men 47%. At the college level, the distribution is perfectly equal, with both genders representing 50% of the teaching staff.

Conversely, the trend reverses in more advanced institutions. In private training institutes, men constitute 53% of the teachers, while women make up 47%. This disparity is most pronounced at the university level, where men account for 70% of the teaching staff, leaving women as the minority at 30%.

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Bar charts

How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • dominate

    to have a commanding influence or be the majority

  • distribution

    the way in which something is shared among a group

  • imbalance

    a lack of proportion or equality between two things

  • constitute

    to be a part of a whole or make up

  • disparity

    a great difference between two or more things

  • pronounced

    very noticeable, obvious, or strongly marked

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Women dominate the teaching profession in early childhood and primary education, whereas men represent the majority of staff in higher education settings.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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