Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Percentage of people getting married by age group in 1996: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 183 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The charts below give information on the ages of people when they got married in one particular country in 1996 and 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Age when getting married (by age group) 1996 (%)
04812162016 - 1920 - 2425 - 2930 - 3435 - 3940 - 44
  • Female
  • Male
View the data
16 - 1920 - 2425 - 2930 - 3435 - 3940 - 44
Female1611.8742
Male02.29975.5

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8183 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the distribution of marriage ages for males and females in a specific country during 1996. Overall, it is clear that women tended to marry at a younger age than men, with a significant concentration of female marriages occurring in their twenties. Conversely, male marriages were more evenly spread across the 25 to 39 age range.

For females, the most common age group for marriage was 25-29, accounting for 11.8% of the total. This was followed by the 30-34 age group at 7% and the 20-24 group at 6%. Marriage rates for women declined significantly outside these brackets, with only 4% marrying between 35-39, 2% between 40-44, and a negligible 1% in the 16-19 age group.

In contrast, the male marriage pattern was more balanced. The highest proportions were recorded in the 25-29 and 30-34 age groups, both standing at 9%. The 35-39 age group followed at 7%, while 5.5% of men married between 40-44. Notably, very few men married before the age of 25, with only 2.2% in the 20-24 bracket and none recorded in the 16-19 age category.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • distribution

    the way in which something is spread out

  • concentration

    a large amount of something in one place

  • proportion

    a part or share of a total amount

  • bracket

    a group or range of values or ages

  • negligible

    so small that it is not worth considering

  • conversely

    used to introduce a statement that is opposite

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

In 1996, the peak age for marriage was 25-29 for women, while men showed a more even distribution across the 25-29 and 30-34 age brackets.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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