Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Percentage of unemployed graduates aged 20-24 in a European country: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 191 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Graduate unemployment by Gender, 2008 & 2009 (%)
0510152025Jan' 08April' 08July' 08Oct' 08Jan' 09April' 09July' 09Oct' 09
  • Men
  • Women
View the data
Jan' 08April' 08July' 08Oct' 08Jan' 09April' 09July' 09Oct' 09
Men10771612121122
Women7.56611961014

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8191 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of unemployed graduates aged 20-24 in a European country between January 2008 and October 2009. Overall, it is clear that unemployment rates for both men and women were volatile throughout the period, with men consistently recording higher figures than their female counterparts. Both groups reached their peak unemployment levels in October 2009.

In early 2008, 10% of male graduates were unemployed, compared to 7.5% of women. These figures dipped to 7% and 6% respectively by April 2008, remaining stable until July 2008. However, a sharp increase occurred in October 2008, with male unemployment rising to 16% and female unemployment to 11%.

At the start of 2009, the rate for men stood at 12%, while women saw a rate of 9%. By April 2009, male unemployment remained at 12%, whereas female unemployment dropped to 6%. Following a slight decrease in July 2009, both groups experienced a significant surge by October 2009. Male unemployment reached a period high of 22%, while female unemployment also peaked at 14%. Throughout the entire timeframe, the gap between male and female unemployment remained evident, particularly during the final quarter of 2009.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • fluctuated

    changed frequently and irregularly in value or amount

  • volatile

    liable to change rapidly and unpredictably for worse

  • counterparts

    people or things that correspond to another

  • surged

    increased suddenly and powerfully in a short time

  • timeframe

    a specified period of time during which events occur

  • evident

    plain or obvious to the eye or mind

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, graduate unemployment rates for both genders fluctuated significantly over the two-year period, with men consistently experiencing higher unemployment levels than women.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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