Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Reasons for study and employer support across different age groups: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 192 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Reasons for study according to age of student (percentage)
020406080100under 2626-2930-3940-49over 49
  • For career
  • For interest
View the data
under 2626-2930-3940-49over 49
For career8070584119
For interest1015254170
Employer support, by age group (Time off and help with fees) (percentage)
020406080100under 2626-2930-3940-49over 49
View the data
under 2626-2930-3940-49over 49
Employer support6451343845

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8192 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The provided charts illustrate the motivations for pursuing further education across five age demographics and the corresponding levels of employer support received. Overall, there is a clear inverse relationship between age and career-focused study, whereas interest-based learning gains popularity as students get older. Employer support is highest for the youngest cohort and generally trends downwards thereafter.

Regarding reasons for study, the youngest group (under 26) is overwhelmingly motivated by career prospects at 80%, compared to only 10% for interest. This career-driven trend persists but weakens with age, dropping to 70% for those aged 26-29 and 58% for those aged 30-39. By the 40-49 age bracket, the motivations are evenly split at 41% each. Conversely, for those over 49, interest becomes the primary reason for study at 70%, while career goals account for only 19%.

Employer support, encompassing time off and financial assistance, is most prevalent for the youngest students at 64%. This figure steadily declines to 51% for the 26-29 group and reaches a low of 34% for those aged 30-39. Interestingly, support levels recover slightly for older groups, rising to 38% for those aged 40-49 and 45% for those over 49.

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Bar charts

How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • inverse relationship

    two variables moving in opposite directions to each other

  • cohort

    a group of people sharing a common characteristic

  • predominant

    the most common or main feature or factor

  • encompassing

    including a wide range of different specific elements

  • steadily

    changing in a gradual and continuous regular manner

  • conversely

    introducing a statement that reverses the previous point

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While career advancement is the primary motivation for younger students, interest becomes the dominant driver for older learners, and employer support generally declines as age increases, with a notable exception for the oldest group.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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