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Rhino Poaching Statistics in South African Provinces from 2010 to 2012: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 195 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows an update on Rhino poaching in South Africa between 2010 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Update on Rhino Poaching Statistics in South Africa (2010-2012) (Number of Rhino's Poached)
0100200300400500Kruger National ParkMarakele National ParkGautengLimpopoMapumalangaNorth WestEastern CapeFree StateKwa-Zulu NatalWestern CapeNorthern Cape
  • 2010
  • 2011
  • 2012
View the data
Kruger National ParkMarakele National ParkGautengLimpopoMapumalangaNorth WestEastern CapeFree StateKwa-Zulu NatalWestern CapeNorthern Cape
2010145015521757433802
2011252797431211143470
20121273029719302220

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8195 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the number of rhinos poached across various South African provinces and national parks between 2010 and 2012. Overall, it is evident that Kruger National Park was the primary target for poachers, significantly outstripping all other locations in every year surveyed. While poaching numbers peaked in 2011 for several areas, there was a general downward trend by 2012.

Kruger National Park recorded 145 incidents in 2010, which surged to a peak of 252 in 2011 before dropping to 127 in 2012. In contrast, other regions reported much lower figures. Limpopo experienced a notable rise from 52 cases in 2010 to 74 in 2011, followed by a decline to 29 in 2012. Similarly, North West saw its highest poaching count in 2010 with 57 incidents, which subsequently fell to 21 and 19 in the following two years.

Kwa-Zulu Natal maintained relatively consistent levels, starting at 38 in 2010, dipping slightly to 34 in 2011, and reaching 22 by 2012. Other locations, such as Gauteng, Mapumalanga, and the Eastern Cape, showed minor fluctuations, generally remaining below 30 incidents annually. Northern Cape and Western Cape reported negligible or zero poaching activity throughout the three-year period.

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How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • outstripping

    exceeding or surpassing the amount of something else

  • fluctuating

    rising and falling irregularly in number or amount

  • surged

    increased suddenly and powerfully in a short time

  • negligible

    so small or unimportant as to be ignored

  • downward trend

    a general direction in which something is decreasing

  • consistently

    acting or done in the same way over time

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Kruger National Park consistently experienced the highest number of rhino poaching incidents throughout the period, while most other regions saw fluctuating or declining figures.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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