Academic Writing Task 1 · process diagram

The life cycle of a salmon from egg to adult fish: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 process diagram question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about process diagrams.
  • 190 words
  • Process diagrams
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The life cycle of a salmon
  1. 1.Eggs in fresh water
  2. 2.Alevin
  3. 3.Fry
  4. 4.Parr
  5. 5.Smolt
  6. 6.Adult
  7. 7.Spawning Adult

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Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8190 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The provided diagram illustrates the various stages in the life cycle of a salmon, beginning from the egg stage in fresh water and concluding with the spawning adult. Overall, the process is cyclical and spans several years, requiring the fish to transition between fresh water environments and the sea to complete its development.

The cycle commences with eggs laid in fresh water, which hatch after approximately three months. The resulting alevin feed on their yolk sacs for several weeks before maturing into fry, which are five to ten weeks old and capable of swimming. Subsequently, the fish develop into parr, characterised by 'finger' markings, and eventually reach the smolt stage at one to three years of age, at which point they group together and migrate to the sea.

Once in the ocean, the salmon spend between one and eight years maturing into adults. The final phase involves the adult salmon returning to fresh water to spawn. This spawning adult stage is relatively short, as the fish die within two weeks of reproduction, thereby completing the life cycle and allowing the process to begin anew with the next generation of eggs.

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Process diagrams

How to write about process diagrams: tips and vocabulary

  • →Say how many stages there are and where the process starts and ends.
  • →Use the passive and sequencers: first, after this, once, finally.
  • →Keep every stage; a missing step costs task achievement.
  • commences

    to begin or start a particular process

  • subsequently

    happening after something else in a sequence

  • maturing

    the process of becoming fully grown or developed

  • migrate

    to move from one region to another periodically

  • characterised by

    having a particular feature or quality as typical

  • anew

    in a new or different and typically better way

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

The life cycle of a salmon is a complex process that takes place in both fresh water and the sea, involving seven distinct developmental stages.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe process diagrams?+

Say how many stages there are and where the process starts and ends. Use the passive and sequencers: first, after this, once, finally. Keep every stage; a missing step costs task achievement.

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