Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Top business priorities for US companies of different sizes in 2016: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 bar chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about bar charts.
  • 181 words
  • Bar charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows the top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Top priorities by business companies in the USA in 2016 (%)
0204060801000 to 25 employees26 to 200 employees201 or more employees
  • Converting contacts/leads to customers
  • Increasing number of contacts/leads
  • Increasing revenue derived from existing customers
  • Providing ROI of marketing activities
  • Reducing the cost of contact/lead/customer acquisition
View the data
0 to 25 employees26 to 200 employees201 or more employees
Converting contacts/leads to customers717366
Increasing number of contacts/leads717962
Increasing revenue derived from existing customers434755
Providing ROI of marketing activities334758
Reducing the cost of contact/lead/customer acquisition202630

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8181 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The bar chart illustrates the primary business priorities for companies in the USA in 2016, categorised by their number of employees. Overall, it is evident that lead generation and conversion were the most critical goals for businesses regardless of their size, whereas reducing acquisition costs was consistently ranked as the lowest priority.

For smaller companies (0-25 employees) and mid-sized firms (26-200 employees), converting contacts into customers and increasing the number of leads were the top two priorities. Specifically, 71% of the smallest firms prioritised both, while mid-sized companies showed a stronger focus on increasing leads at 79%, compared to 73% for conversion. In contrast, larger organisations (201+ employees) prioritised conversion (66%) over increasing leads (62%).

Regarding other objectives, larger companies placed significantly more emphasis on increasing revenue from existing customers (55%) and demonstrating marketing ROI (58%) compared to their smaller counterparts. For instance, only 33% of the smallest firms focused on marketing ROI. Finally, reducing acquisition costs was the least prioritised goal across all groups, peaking at 30% for the largest companies and dropping to just 20% for the smallest businesses.

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Bar charts

How to write about bar charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else.
  • →If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank.
  • →Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.
  • categorised

    Divided into groups based on shared characteristics

  • regardless of

    Without being affected by or influenced by

  • consistently

    In every case or on every occasion

  • counterparts

    People or things that have the same function

  • peaking

    Reaching the highest level or value

  • significantly

    To a sufficiently great or important degree

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Across all company sizes, converting leads and increasing the number of contacts were the primary priorities, while reducing acquisition costs remained the least significant objective.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe bar charts?+

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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