Academic Writing Task 1 · table

Trends in employment and factory numbers in England and Wales 1851-1901: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 table question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about tables.
  • 190 words
  • Tables
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901
YearMale employeesFemale employeesTotal employeesFactories
1851287,100190,000477,100225
1861131,780160,000291,780227
187180,12360,000140,123622
188176,13250,000126,132721
189165,00040,000105,000625
190131,00030,00061,000600

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8190 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The table illustrates changes in the workforce and the number of factories in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901. Overall, the data reveals a stark contrast between the shrinking labour force and the expansion of industrial facilities.

In 1851, the total workforce stood at 477,100, comprising 287,100 males and 190,000 females. This figure dropped sharply to 291,780 by 1861 and continued to fall steadily throughout the remainder of the century, reaching a low of 61,000 employees by 1901. Notably, the male workforce saw the most dramatic reduction, plummeting from 287,100 to 31,000, while the female workforce decreased from 190,000 to 30,000 over the same period.

Conversely, the number of factories followed an upward trajectory during the first half of the period. Starting at 225 in 1851, the count remained stable until 1861, before surging to 622 in 1871 and peaking at 721 in 1881. Although the number of factories subsequently declined to 625 in 1891 and 600 in 1901, the final figure remained substantially higher than the levels recorded in the mid-19th century. This inverse relationship suggests a shift in industrial structure despite the contraction in total human labour.

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How to write about tables: tips and vocabulary

  • →Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself.
  • →Select; do not list every cell.
  • →Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.
  • plummeting

    falling or dropping straight down at high speed

  • trajectory

    the path followed by an object or trend

  • contraction

    the process of becoming smaller or shrinking

  • inverse

    opposite in position, order, or effect

  • surging

    a sudden powerful forward or upward movement

  • comprising

    consisting of or made up of parts

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While the total number of employees experienced a consistent decline over the fifty-year period, the number of factories saw a significant overall increase despite fluctuating in the final decades.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe tables?+

Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself. Select; do not list every cell. Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.

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