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Comparison of different kinds of energy production in France 1995-2005: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 pie chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about pie charts.
  • 173 words
  • Pie charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The chart below shows a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Energy production in France 1995 (%)
  • Coal: 29.8%
  • Other: 4.9%
  • Nuclear: 6.4%
  • Petro: 29.27%
  • Gas: 29.63%
View the data
CategoryValue (%)
Coal29.8
Other4.9
Nuclear6.4
Petro29.27
Gas29.63
Energy production in France 2005 (%)
  • Coal: 30.93%
  • Other: 9.1%
  • Nuclear: 10.1%
  • Petro: 19.55%
  • Gas: 30.31%
View the data
CategoryValue (%)
Coal30.93
Other9.1
Nuclear10.1
Petro19.55
Gas30.31

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8173 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The two pie charts illustrate the distribution of various energy production methods in France during 1995 and 2005. Overall, it is evident that the energy landscape shifted notably, with petroleum becoming less dominant while other sources, particularly nuclear and 'other' categories, gained prominence.

In 1995, energy production was relatively balanced between coal (29.80%), gas (29.63%), and petroleum (29.27%). Nuclear energy accounted for 6.40%, while other sources made up the smallest portion at 4.90%. By 2005, the proportions had changed. Coal remained the leading source, increasing slightly to 30.93%, followed closely by gas, which also rose to 30.31%.

Conversely, the share of petroleum dropped sharply from 29.27% in 1995 to 19.55% in 2005. Meanwhile, nuclear energy production saw a marked increase, reaching 10.10% by the end of the period. Similarly, the 'other' category nearly doubled its contribution, rising from 4.90% to 9.10%. In summary, the decade was characterised by a move away from petroleum-based energy towards a more diversified mix, with coal and gas maintaining their status as the primary energy sources in France.

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Pie charts

How to write about pie charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview.
  • →Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority.
  • →With two pies, compare the same slice across both.
  • distribution

    the way in which something is shared or spread

  • prominence

    the state of being important or widely known

  • proportion

    a part, share, or number considered in comparative relation

  • sharply

    in a sudden and very noticeable way

  • diversified

    made more varied or different in nature

  • characterised

    marked by a particular feature or quality

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While coal, gas, nuclear, and other sources saw increases in their share of energy production, petroleum experienced a significant decline over the decade.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe pie charts?+

Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview. Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority. With two pies, compare the same slice across both.

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