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Demographic Trends in Scotland from 1940 to 2020: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 186 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The figure shows demographic trends in Scotland.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Demographic Trends (Scotland) (%)
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  • Birth Rate
  • Population Growth Rate
  • Death Rate
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19401945195019551960196519701975198019851990199520002005201020152020
Birth Rate2.51.92.11.91.111.210.90.80.70.70.80.70.60.50.5
Population Growth Rate0.80.511.40.80.70.80.60.50.40.20.20.20–––
Death Rate1.51.20.90.60.40.40.40.40.40.30.30.30.30.30.30.40.6

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8186 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates changes in birth, death, and population growth rates in Scotland between 1940 and 2020. Overall, all three indicators experienced a downward trend over the period, with the birth rate consistently remaining the highest until the end of the timeframe.

In 1940, the birth rate stood at 2.5%, significantly higher than the death rate of 1.5% and the population growth rate of 0.8%. While the birth rate fluctuated, reaching a secondary peak of 2.1% in 1950, it followed a general decline to 0.5% by 2020. Similarly, the death rate dropped steadily from its initial 1.5% to a low of 0.3% between 1985 and 2005, before rising slightly to 0.6% by 2020.

The population growth rate showed more volatility, peaking at 1.4% in 1955. Following this, it entered a sustained decline, mirroring the downward trajectory of the birth rate. By 2000, the growth rate had fallen to 0.2%, eventually reaching 0% by 2005. Notably, the birth rate remained above the death rate for the majority of the period, although the gap narrowed significantly as both metrics converged towards the end of the observed timeframe.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • downward trend

    a general movement towards a lower level

  • fluctuated

    changed frequently and irregularly in value

  • sustained decline

    a continuous and prolonged decrease over time

  • converged

    moved towards the same point or value

  • volatility

    the tendency to change rapidly and unpredictably

  • trajectory

    the path or direction of a development

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, all three demographic indicators experienced a downward trend over the period, with the birth rate consistently remaining the highest until the end of the timeframe.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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