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Employment rates for women aged 15-64 in five countries 2003-2009: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 186 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The line graph below gives information about the percentage of women aged 15-64 in employment between 2003 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of women aged 15-64 in employment (2003-2009) (%)
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  • Iceland
  • Canada
  • Germany
  • Chile
  • Turkey
View the data
2003200520072009
Iceland81818078
Canada69697070
Germany59606163
Chile35394041
Turkey25212224

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8186 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of women aged 15-64 in employment across five different nations between 2003 and 2009. Overall, it is clear that Iceland consistently reported the highest female employment rates, whereas Turkey recorded the lowest figures throughout the six-year period. While most countries experienced a gradual increase in employment, Iceland saw a slight decline.

Iceland began the period with 81% of women in employment, a figure that remained stable until 2005 before dipping slightly to 80% in 2007 and ending at 78% in 2009. Canada followed a more stable trajectory, starting at 69% in 2003 and rising marginally to reach 70% by 2009. Germany also showed consistent growth, climbing steadily from 59% in 2003 to 63% by the end of the period.

In contrast, Chile and Turkey occupied the lower end of the spectrum. Chile experienced a notable upward trend, with its employment rate rising from 35% in 2003 to 41% in 2009. Turkey, however, saw its rate fluctuate, dropping from 25% in 2003 to a low of 21% in 2005, before recovering to 24% by 2009, remaining significantly below the other nations.

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Line graphs

How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • fluctuate

    to rise and fall irregularly in number

  • trajectory

    the path or direction something follows over time

  • marginally

    by a very small or insignificant amount

  • spectrum

    a range of different values or positions

  • consistently

    acting or occurring in the same way

  • notable

    worthy of attention or striking in nature

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, Iceland consistently maintained the highest employment rate for women, while Turkey remained at the lowest level throughout the period, with most countries showing a gradual upward trend except for Iceland.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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