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Enrolment trends of overseas and local students in Australian universities: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 188 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over ten years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Overseas Students (number of students)
020,00040,00060,00080,000100,0002001200220032004200520062007200820092010
  • Commencing
  • Total
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2001200220032004200520062007200820092010
Commencing11,00012,00013,50015,00018,00020,00025,00030,00040,00041,000
Total20,00027,00030,00039,00045,00052,00059,00066,00077,00081,000
Local Students (number of students)
0200,000400,000600,000800,0001,000,0002001200220032004200520062007200820092010
  • Commencing
  • Total
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2001200220032004200520062007200820092010
Commencing180,000220,000200,000190,000190,000185,000200,000215,000210,000205,000
Total400,000460,000500,000540,000560,000580,000605,000605,000605,000605,000

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8188 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The provided line graphs illustrate the enrolment figures for overseas and local students in Australian universities between 2001 and 2010, distinguishing between commencing and total student numbers.

Overall, overseas student enrolments exhibited a steady upward trend throughout the decade. In contrast, local student numbers were significantly higher, though their growth rate slowed considerably, with total enrolments remaining constant from 2007 onwards.

Regarding overseas students, the total number rose from 20,000 in 2001 to 81,000 by 2010. Commencing overseas students followed a similar trajectory, increasing from 11,000 to 41,000 over the same period. The growth was particularly pronounced between 2008 and 2009, where commencing numbers jumped from 30,000 to 40,000.

Local student data presents a different pattern. Total enrolments grew from 400,000 in 2001 to a peak of 605,000 in 2007, after which the figure remained static until 2010. Commencing local students fluctuated more noticeably; after starting at 180,000, they reached a high of 220,000 in 2002 before experiencing a period of decline and recovery, eventually finishing at 205,000 in 2010. Despite these fluctuations, local student numbers remained substantially higher than their overseas counterparts throughout the entire ten-year timeframe.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • upward trend

    a general movement towards a higher level

  • plateaued

    reached a state of little or no change

  • trajectory

    the path or development followed by something

  • pronounced

    very noticeable, obvious, or strongly marked

  • fluctuated

    changed frequently and irregularly in number

  • counterparts

    people or things that have similar functions

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While overseas student numbers experienced consistent growth across both categories, local student enrolments showed more stability, particularly in the total figures which plateaued after 2007.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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