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Main purposes of overseas residents' visits to the UK 2000-2016: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 174 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below gives information about the main purposes of overseas residents' visit to the UK between 2000 and 2016.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Overseas residents visits to the UK - by purpose, 2000 to 2016 (thousands)
04,0008,00012,00016,00020,000200020022004200620082010201220142016
  • Holiday
  • Visit Friends or Relatives
  • Business
  • Miscellaneous
View the data
20002001200220032004200520062007200820092010201120122013201420152016
Holiday9,3007,6007,8008,0009,3009,70010,60010,90011,00011,40011,70012,00012,00012,50013,50013,80013,900
Visit Friends or Relatives5,9006,0006,4007,0007,9008,6009,4009,8009,8008,9008,5008,9009,0009,3009,70010,50011,600
Business7,3006,8007,2007,0007,4007,9009,1008,9008,2006,7006,9007,3007,5007,9008,3008,8009,200
Miscellaneous2,8002,7002,9002,8003,1003,3003,7003,4003,2003,2003,0002,8002,8002,9002,8003,0003,000

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8174 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the number of visits made by overseas residents to the UK for four distinct purposes between 2000 and 2016. Overall, it is clear that all categories of visits experienced an upward trend over the period, with holiday visits consistently remaining the most popular purpose for travel to the UK.

Holiday visits began at 9,300 thousand in 2000, dipped slightly in 2001, and then followed a steady upward trajectory to reach a peak of 13,900 thousand by 2016. Similarly, visits to friends or relatives showed significant growth, rising from 5,900 thousand to 11,600 thousand, overtaking business visits in 2003 and becoming the second most common reason for travel by the end of the period.

In contrast, business visits fluctuated more noticeably. Starting at 7,300 thousand, they peaked at 9,100 thousand in 2006 before dropping to 6,700 thousand in 2009. They subsequently recovered to reach 9,200 thousand by 2016. Miscellaneous visits remained the least popular category throughout the entire period, showing minimal variation and hovering consistently between 2,700 and 3,700 thousand visits.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • upward trajectory

    a path or trend that is moving upwards

  • fluctuated

    changed frequently and uncertainly in level

  • overtaking

    catching up with and passing another in rank

  • hovering

    remaining at or near a particular level

  • minimal variation

    very little change in the recorded data

  • distinct

    clearly different or of a different kind

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, all categories of visits experienced an upward trend over the period, with holiday visits consistently remaining the most popular purpose for travel to the UK.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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