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Online retail sales proportions by sector in New Zealand 2003 and 2013: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 pie chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about pie charts.
  • 184 words
  • Pie charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003
  • Travel: 36
  • Film/ Music: 21
  • Books: 19
  • Clothes: 24
View the data
CategoryValue
Travel36
Film/ Music21
Books19
Clothes24
Online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2013
  • Travel: 29
  • Film/ Music: 33
  • Books: 22
  • Clothes: 16
View the data
CategoryValue
Travel29
Film/ Music33
Books22
Clothes16

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8184 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The two pie charts illustrate the distribution of online retail sales across four distinct sectors in New Zealand during the years 2003 and 2013. Overall, it is evident that while Travel was the dominant sector in 2003, Film/Music became the leading category by 2013. Furthermore, the data indicates a shift in consumer preference away from travel and clothing towards entertainment and literature.

In 2003, Travel accounted for the largest portion of online sales at 36%, followed by Clothes at 24%. Film/Music and Books represented smaller shares, contributing 21% and 19% respectively. By 2013, the landscape had changed significantly. The proportion of sales attributed to Film/Music rose substantially to 33%, making it the most popular sector. Similarly, the share for Books increased to 22%.

Conversely, the Travel sector saw its market share contract to 29% by 2013. A more pronounced decline was observed in the Clothes sector, which dropped from 24% in 2003 to just 16% a decade later. In summary, the retail sectors experienced varying degrees of growth and contraction, with entertainment-related purchases becoming increasingly prominent in the online marketplace over the ten-year period.

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Pie charts

How to write about pie charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview.
  • →Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority.
  • →With two pies, compare the same slice across both.
  • distribution

    the way in which something is shared out

  • dominant

    having the most influence or the largest share

  • proportion

    a part or share of a total amount

  • substantially

    by a large or significant amount

  • contract

    to decrease in size, number, or importance

  • prominent

    important, noticeable, or standing out clearly

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Over the decade, Film/Music and Books saw growth in their share of online sales, whereas Travel and Clothes experienced a decline in their respective proportions.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe pie charts?+

Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview. Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority. With two pies, compare the same slice across both.

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