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Percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries from 1962 to 2012: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 191 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012 (%)
020406080100196219701980199020002012
  • Service
  • Manufacturing
  • Agriculture
  • Construction
  • Mining
View the data
196219701980199020002012
Service525763707678
Manufacturing252520242210
Agriculture1198544
Construction9999910
Mining122222

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8191 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the shifts in the percentage of the Australian workforce across five distinct industries between 1962 and 2012. Overall, it is clear that the service industry became the dominant employer, while the manufacturing and agricultural sectors saw their shares of the workforce diminish over the fifty-year period.

In 1962, the service industry accounted for 52% of the workforce, a figure that climbed steadily to reach 78% by 2012. Conversely, manufacturing began at 25% in 1962, fluctuated slightly throughout the decades, and then plummeted to 10% by the end of the period. Agriculture followed a similar downward trajectory, starting at 11% and gradually decreasing to a low of 4% by 2012.

In contrast, the construction and mining sectors remained relatively stable. Construction maintained a consistent share of the workforce, hovering around 9% for most of the period before rising slightly to 10% in 2012. Mining represented the smallest proportion of the workforce throughout the entire timeframe, starting at 1% in 1962 and remaining stagnant at approximately 2% from 1970 onwards. By 2012, the service industry had become the primary employer, dwarfing the combined percentages of the other four sectors.

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Line graphs

How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • plummeted

    fell sharply and suddenly to a lower level

  • downward trajectory

    a path or trend that is moving downwards

  • stagnant

    showing no activity or change in value

  • dwarfing

    making something appear very small by comparison

  • fluctuated

    rose and fell irregularly in number or amount

  • proportion

    a part or share in relation to whole

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

The service sector experienced significant growth over the period, while manufacturing and agriculture saw overall declines in their workforce proportions.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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