Academic Writing Task 1 · pie chart

Proportions of Brighton University graduates entering various employment sectors in 2019: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 pie chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about pie charts.
  • 172 words
  • Pie charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Employment sectors of graduates from Brighton University, 2019 (%)
  • Sport: 0.1%
  • Transportation and warehousing: 7.8%
  • Service industries: 33%
  • Manufacturing industry: 16.3%
  • Politics & government: 12.1%
  • Education: 14.7%
  • Civil service: 5.6%
  • Other: 2.8%
  • Charity: 0.3%
  • Science & technology: 7.3%
View the data
CategoryValue (%)
Sport0.1
Transportation and warehousing7.8
Service industries33
Manufacturing industry16.3
Politics & government12.1
Education14.7
Civil service5.6
Other2.8
Charity0.3
Science & technology7.3

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8172 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The pie chart illustrates the distribution of Brighton University graduates across ten distinct employment sectors in 2019. Overall, it is evident that the service industries dominated the employment landscape, whereas roles in sport and charity were notably rare.

Service industries accounted for exactly one-third of all graduates at 33.0%. This was followed by the manufacturing industry and education, which attracted 16.3% and 14.7% of graduates, respectively. Politics and government also represented a significant portion, employing 12.1% of the cohort. In contrast, the combined figures for transportation and warehousing (7.8%) and science and technology (7.3%) were roughly equivalent to the proportion entering education.

Smaller sectors included the civil service at 5.6% and the 'other' category at 2.8%. The least popular career paths were in the charity sector and sport, which comprised a marginal 0.3% and 0.1% of graduates, respectively. In summary, while a wide variety of sectors absorbed the university's graduates, there was a clear preference for service-oriented and industrial roles, with very few individuals pursuing careers in the charitable or sporting sectors.

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Pie charts

How to write about pie charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview.
  • →Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority.
  • →With two pies, compare the same slice across both.
  • accounted for

    made up a specific portion of the total

  • dominated

    held the largest or most significant share

  • respectively

    in the order previously mentioned in text

  • marginal

    very small or insignificant in total size

  • comprised

    consisted of or made up a part

  • distribution

    the way in which something is shared out

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Service industries were the most popular destination for graduates, while the sport and charity sectors attracted the smallest proportions of the cohort.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe pie charts?+

Name the largest and smallest shares in the overview. Use proportion language: a quarter, just under half, the majority. With two pies, compare the same slice across both.

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