Academic Writing Task 1 · line graph

Trends in male and female gym membership from 1980 to 2010: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 182 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Gym Membership
01,0002,0003,0004,0005,0001980198519901995200020052010
  • men
  • women
View the data
1980198519901995200020052010
men2,1003,9003,0001,7002,0005,000900
women1,0501,8002,0002,8002,3002,8002,200

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8182 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the fluctuations in gym membership numbers for men and women over a thirty-year period between 1980 and 2010. Overall, it is evident that male membership was far more volatile than that of women, reaching a dramatic peak before plummeting, whereas female participation remained relatively consistent with two distinct growth phases.

In 1980, male gym membership stood at approximately 2,100, rising sharply to reach a high of 3,900 by 1985. Following this, numbers declined steadily to a low of 1,700 in 1995. However, a massive surge occurred thereafter, with male membership soaring to a peak of 5,000 in 2005. This was followed by a precipitous drop, with figures falling to just 900 by 2010.

In contrast, female membership began at a lower point of 1,050 in 1980. Participation grew gradually, peaking at 2,800 in 1995, before dipping to 2,300 by 2000. A second period of growth saw female numbers return to 2,800 by 2005, before experiencing a slight decline to 2,200 by the end of the period. Notably, women outnumbered men in gym attendance only between 1992 and 1999.

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Line graphs

How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • volatility

    frequent and unpredictable changes in a trend

  • precipitous

    a very sudden and dramatic downward movement

  • fluctuations

    irregular rising and falling of numerical values

  • outnumbered

    to be greater in quantity than another

  • soaring

    increasing very rapidly to a high level

  • consistent

    acting or done in the same way

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While male gym membership experienced significant volatility with a sharp peak and subsequent decline, female participation followed a more stable, cyclical pattern throughout the period.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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