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Trends in the percentage of tourists visiting four Brighton attractions: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 179 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of tourists to England who visited Brighton attractions (%)
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  • Art Gallery
  • Pavilion
  • Pier
  • Festival
View the data
1980198519901995200020052010
Art Gallery2237202220158
Pavilion24284048353331
Pier1015913121522
Festival30272625272727

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8179 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists visiting four distinct attractions in Brighton between 1980 and 2010. Overall, the Pavilion emerged as the most visited site for the majority of the period, despite a mid-period peak, whereas the Art Gallery experienced a downward trend after an initial surge. The Festival remained relatively stable throughout the three decades.

In 1980, the Festival was the most popular attraction at 30%, followed by the Pavilion at 24% and the Art Gallery at 22%. The Pavilion saw a dramatic rise, peaking at 48% in 1995 before gradually declining to 31% by 2010. Conversely, the Art Gallery spiked to 37% in 1985 but subsequently plummeted, finishing the period as the least visited attraction at just 8%.

The Pier began as the least popular site at 10% in 1980. Its popularity fluctuated, hitting a low of 9% in 1990, before recovering to reach 22% by 2010, matching the Art Gallery's initial 1980 level. Meanwhile, the Festival maintained a consistent performance, hovering between 25% and 30% throughout the entire timeframe, ending at 27% in 2010.

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Line graphs

How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • proportion

    a part or share of a total amount

  • fluctuated

    rose and fell irregularly in number or amount

  • plummeted

    fell or dropped straight down at high speed

  • peaking

    reaching the highest point of value or level

  • stable

    not likely to change or fail suddenly

  • downward trend

    a general direction in which something is decreasing

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

The Pavilion experienced the most significant growth and remained the most popular attraction for most of the period, while the Art Gallery saw a notable decline in popularity.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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