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Trends in UK daily commuting methods from 1970 to 2030: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 193 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus, or train between 1970 and 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus, or train between 1970 and 2030 (millions)
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  • Car
  • Bus
  • Train
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1970198019902000201020202030
Car5.25.36.16.96.97.58.9
Bus443.83.73.43.32.9
Train2.12.22.5333.94.9

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8193 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the daily number of commuters in the UK using cars, buses, and trains between 1970 and 2030. Overall, car travel remained the dominant mode of transport throughout the period, showing a consistent upward trend. Conversely, bus usage gradually declined, while train travel experienced a notable surge, particularly in the latter half of the timeframe.

In 1970, 5.2 million people commuted by car, a figure that grew steadily to reach 6.9 million by 2000. After remaining stable until 2010, car usage accelerated, projected to reach 8.9 million by 2030. In contrast, bus travel started at 4.0 million in 1970 and remained unchanged for a decade before beginning a long-term decline, falling to 2.9 million by 2030.

Train travel, which was the least popular method in 1970 at 2.1 million, saw gradual growth to 3.0 million by 2000. Following a period of stagnation until 2010, the number of train commuters rose sharply, overtaking bus travel around 2015 and reaching a projected 4.9 million by 2030. By the end of the period, train travel had become significantly more popular than bus travel, though it remained well below the figures for car commuters.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • dominant

    having the most influence or being most common

  • surge

    a sudden and powerful upward movement or increase

  • stagnation

    a state of not flowing or moving forward

  • accelerated

    increased in speed or rate of development

  • overtaking

    catching up with and passing while in motion

  • projected

    estimated or predicted based on current trends

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While car travel has consistently been the most popular mode of commuting, train usage has seen a significant rise, whereas bus travel has experienced a steady decline over the period.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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