Academic Writing Task 1 · line graph

Unemployment rate trends in rural and urban Australia during 2012: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 194 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Unemployment rate in Australia, 2012 (%)
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  • Rural areas
  • Urban areas
View the data
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Rural areas6.55.54.55
Urban areas2.23.82.14.8

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8194 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates the fluctuations in unemployment rates across rural and urban regions in Australia throughout the four quarters of 2012.

Overall, rural areas experienced a general downward trend in unemployment, whereas urban areas showed significant volatility, ultimately ending the year with a higher rate than they began. Notably, rural unemployment remained consistently higher than urban unemployment for the majority of the year.

In the first quarter, rural unemployment stood at 6.5%, significantly higher than the 2.2% recorded in urban areas. Over the subsequent two quarters, the rural rate declined steadily, reaching a low of 4.5% by the third quarter. Conversely, urban unemployment rose to 3.8% in the second quarter before dropping sharply to 2.1% in the third quarter, representing the lowest point for either region during the year.

In the final quarter, the trends diverged significantly. Rural unemployment saw a slight increase to 5.0%. Meanwhile, urban unemployment surged dramatically to 4.8%, nearly catching up to the rural figure. By the end of 2012, the gap between the two regions had narrowed to just 0.2 percentage points, a stark contrast to the 4.3 percentage point difference observed at the start of the year.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • fluctuations

    irregular rising and falling in number or amount

  • volatility

    tendency to change rapidly and unpredictably in value

  • consistently

    in every case or on every occasion

  • subsequent

    coming after something in time or order

  • surged

    increased suddenly and powerfully in a short time

  • diverged

    separated and went in different directions

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

Overall, rural areas experienced a general downward trend in unemployment, whereas urban areas showed significant volatility, ultimately ending the year with a higher rate than they began.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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