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Unemployment rate trends in the UK, Europe and Japan 1993-2007: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 184 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan, 1993 - 2007 (%)
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  • UK
  • EU
  • Japan
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19931995199719992001200320052007
UK11986.855.15.16
EU91111.51098.48.57.7
Japan2333565.14

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8184 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The line graph illustrates changes in unemployment rates across the UK, the rest of Europe (EU), and Japan between 1993 and 2007. Overall, the UK and EU saw their unemployment figures decline over the fourteen-year period, whereas Japan experienced a notable increase in joblessness, despite some volatility towards the end of the timeframe.

In 1993, the UK had the highest unemployment rate at 11%, followed by the EU at 9%, and Japan at 2%. The UK’s rate fell steadily to 6.8% by 1999 and reached a low of 5% in 2001, before rising slightly to finish at 6% in 2007. Conversely, the EU rate climbed to a peak of 11.5% in 1997, after which it followed a downward trajectory, ending the period at 7.7%.

Japan’s unemployment rate remained relatively stable at 3% between 1995 and 1999, having risen from 2% in 1993. However, it surged to 6% by 2003, marking its highest point on the graph. Following this peak, the Japanese rate declined to 5.1% in 2005 and concluded at 4% in 2007, remaining the lowest among the three regions throughout the entire period.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • downward trajectory

    a steady movement or trend towards a lower level

  • fluctuating

    rising and falling irregularly in number or amount

  • volatility

    the quality of being subject to frequent unpredictable changes

  • surged

    increased suddenly and powerfully in a short time

  • concluded

    brought to an end or finished at a point

  • notable

    worthy of attention or striking in its significance

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

While the UK and EU experienced a general downward trend in unemployment over the period, Japan saw its rate rise significantly before fluctuating in the final years.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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