Academic Writing Task 1 · line graph

Unemployment rates and emigration figures for Ireland from 1988 to 2008: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 line graph question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about line graphs.
  • 185 words
  • Line graphs
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The graph below shows unemployment levels in Ireland and the number of people leaving the country between 1988 and 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Unemployment and emigration in Ireland 1988-2008 (percentage and number of people)
010,00020,00030,00040,00050,0001988199020002008
  • Unemployment rate %
  • People leaving
View the data
1988199020002008
Unemployment rate %141658
People leaving40,00025,00020,00040,000

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8185 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The provided line graph illustrates the fluctuations in the unemployment rate and the number of people leaving Ireland over a twenty-year period, from 1988 to 2008.

Overall, both indicators experienced a significant decline during the middle of the period, before witnessing a marked resurgence in the final years leading up to 2008. While the two trends often moved in tandem, the unemployment rate showed more volatility, particularly at the start of the timeframe.

In 1988, the unemployment rate stood at 14%, while 40,000 people left the country. By 1990, unemployment peaked at 16%, yet the number of people leaving dropped to 25,000. This divergence highlights that emigration did not always mirror the immediate rise in joblessness. Following this, both figures trended downwards, with unemployment reaching a low of 5% and emigration falling to 20,000 by the year 2000.

From 2000 to 2008, the situation reversed. The unemployment rate climbed back to 8%, and the number of people leaving the country doubled from its 2000 low, returning to the 40,000 mark by 2008. This final period demonstrates a clear correlation between rising unemployment and increased emigration.

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How to write about line graphs: tips and vocabulary

  • →Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest.
  • →Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn.
  • →Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.
  • fluctuations

    irregular rising and falling in number or amount

  • resurgence

    an increase or revival after a period

  • in tandem

    happening together or at the same time

  • volatility

    tendency to change rapidly and unpredictably

  • divergence

    the process of becoming different or separate

  • correlation

    a mutual relationship between two or more things

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

The graph illustrates a general downward trend in both unemployment and emigration for most of the period, followed by a sharp increase in both metrics towards 2008.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe line graphs?+

Overview first: the overall direction of each line and which was highest. Group lines that move together instead of describing each one in turn. Give the start and end figures plus the peak or low point, not every value.

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