Academic Writing Task 1 · mixed chart

Workforce profile of top management positions in South Africa 2015/16: IELTS Writing Task 1 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 1 mixed chart question with a Band 8 sample answer, the chart redrawn with its data, the vocabulary that lifts the report and how to write about mixed charts.
  • 193 words
  • Mixed charts
  • Academic
  • 20 minutes

The question

The charts below show the workforce profile at the top management jobs by ethnicity and race in South Africa based on a 2015/16 report.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Workforce profile at top management jobs by ethnicity and race
  • Foreign national: 3.5
  • African: 14.3
  • Coloured: 4.7
  • Indian: 8.6
  • White: 68.9
View the data
CategoryValue
Foreign national3.5
African14.3
Coloured4.7
Indian8.6
White68.9
Workforce profile by sector (%)
020406080100AfricanColouredIndianWhiteForeign nationals
  • Private
  • Public
View the data
AfricanColouredIndianWhiteForeign nationals
Private10.84.58.772.43.6
Public73.27.46.512.60.4

Chart redrawn by BandLadder from the data in the original IELTS practice task. Many IELTS practice tasks come from the Cambridge IELTS series (Cambridge University Press & Assessment); all rights in the original tasks remain with their owners.

Model answer

Band 8 sample answer

Band 8193 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

The pie chart illustrates the overall ethnic and racial composition of top management positions in South Africa during 2015/16, while the bar chart provides a breakdown of these demographics by public and private sectors. Overall, it is evident that White individuals held the vast majority of top management roles, particularly in the private sector, while the public sector showed a starkly different profile with a high concentration of African employees.

As shown in the pie chart, White people accounted for 68.9% of all top management positions, followed by African (14.3%), Indian (8.6%), Coloured (4.7%), and Foreign national (3.5%) groups. In the private sector, this trend was even more pronounced, with White employees making up 72.4% of the workforce, compared to just 10.8% for African, 8.7% for Indian, 4.5% for Coloured, and 3.6% for Foreign nationals.

Conversely, the public sector was dominated by African employees at 73.2%. White staff represented 12.6% of public sector management, while Coloured, Indian, and Foreign national groups comprised 7.4%, 6.5%, and 0.4% respectively. Notably, the representation of African staff in the public sector was significantly higher than in the private sector, contrasting sharply with the distribution of White employees.

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Mixed charts

How to write about mixed charts: tips and vocabulary

  • →Write one overview sentence that links the two visuals.
  • →Give each visual its own detail paragraph.
  • →Point out where one chart explains the other.
  • dominated

    to have a commanding influence or presence

  • composition

    the way in which something is put together

  • pronounced

    very noticeable, obvious, or strongly marked

  • conversely

    introducing a statement that reverses a previous one

  • comprised

    to consist of or be made up of

  • starkly

    in a way that is very clear and obvious

Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?+

White employees dominated top management roles overall and within the private sector, whereas the public sector was primarily composed of African staff.

How many words and how long for IELTS Writing Task 1?+

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How is IELTS Writing Task 1 scored?+

On four criteria: task achievement, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. A clear overview of the main features is what most separates Band 6 from Band 7 and above.

How do I describe mixed charts?+

Write one overview sentence that links the two visuals. Give each visual its own detail paragraph. Point out where one chart explains the other.

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